Tuesday, June 5, 2007

I'm Sophie

I’m sophie my life was very difficult. I have two sisters Martha, Lettie of a poor woodcutter. I’m orphan my mother died when I was two years old. My father married a girl called Fanny. When I grow up and I went the best school my father died than my stepmother, Fanny gave us training to work and I was stuck in the hat shop. I knew that would happen. My sister Martha worked as a witch assistant and Lettie worked in bakery I am looking for luck I will find it.The witch of the waste turned me into adecrepit old woman, this the first time I fell like old woman , when I decided to leave my home to seek for fortune, I was very afraid, than I looked up to see Howl’s castle was moving. Inside the castle was happened for me more thing strange like a fear speak, there is a child , but I’m sure my life is to be changing and I can found my lucky .


3 comments:

charmy-sachy said...

Your life might be difficult. But I'm glad to hear that you are sure that your life will be changing happily and you realized that you will be able to find your fortune. I hope you will be happy.

Eriko said...

I think your life is fulll of difficulties. Especially, it was the most hard time when you was turned into an old lady. I`m so surprised and feel sorry for the happening. I guss you may feel difficulties in your daily life. I hope the day when yor spell is taken and you get a fortune will come.

Chris said...

1/2: 2 paragraphs long

3/3: Stays in character.

4/5: Vocabulary (Some vocabulary is not accurate)

Total: 8/10